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Divyansh Dubey

  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Forbidden Fire ......

    Hello Shyna, I really liked your work. The way you described the fire was both terrifying and comforting . The way you have personified fire as a dragon was really ...

    May 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: My Ailing Friend

    Hello @anne27 , I think this was a very good poem. It condenses the difficulties of this year in very good way. I liked the way you have personified the ...

    Dec 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Byzantine music

    Hi, Buranko This particular peace of work creates a certain type of peace in the reader's mind. The imagery you have used is just adorable. It has a soothing effect ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: क्या गलत है?

    You are the most welcome.

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: क्या गलत है?

    You are the most welcome.

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Thanks for the review .

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Thanks for the review .

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi Mahira, Thanks for praising my work. Your words have been inspiring and you are right I am an Indian . I promise you that I will review your works. ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi Mahira, Thanks for praising my work. Your words have been inspiring and you are right I am an Indian . I promise you that I will review your works. ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: क्या गलत है?

    Hi, @nanda , This poem is one the best poem I read on YWS and this is an extremely illuminating poem and I like the way you have inspired each ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Literature Re: क्या गलत है?

    Hi, @nanda , This poem is one the best poem I read on YWS and this is an extremely illuminating poem and I like the way you have inspired each ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Just Something about Hurricanes and Raindrops

    Hi @alliyah , I think you have wrote a very good poem. I agree with @chrisdixon on the mistakes but overall it was very good and illuminating. Divyansh

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi Lee, it is nice to see that you have liked my poem and I completely agree with the mistakes you wrote about and I will try my best to ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi Buoranko, I am happy to know that my poem has made someone happy. The mistakes you wrote about were completely wrong and I will try hard in future not ...

    Sep 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Four Men Poem

    Hi alliyah, I am extremely happy that you liked the poem. I completely agree with the mistakes you highlighted and will try to improve it in future works. Thanks for ...

    Sep 17, 2020


A big mountain of sugar is too much for one man. I can see now why God portions it out in those little packets.
— Homer Simpson