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Re: Forbidden Fire ......
Hello Shyna, I really liked your work. The way you described the fire was both terrifying and comforting . The way you have personified fire as a dragon was really ...
May 15, 2021 -
Re: My Ailing Friend
Hello @anne27 , I think this was a very good poem. It condenses the difficulties of this year in very good way. I liked the way you have personified the ...
Dec 19, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Hi, Buranko This particular peace of work creates a certain type of peace in the reader's mind. The imagery you have used is just adorable. It has a soothing effect ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: क्या गलत है?
You are the most welcome.
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: क्या गलत है?
You are the most welcome.
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Thanks for the review .
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Thanks for the review .
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Hi Mahira, Thanks for praising my work. Your words have been inspiring and you are right I am an Indian . I promise you that I will review your works. ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Hi Mahira, Thanks for praising my work. Your words have been inspiring and you are right I am an Indian . I promise you that I will review your works. ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: क्या गलत है?
Hi, @nanda , This poem is one the best poem I read on YWS and this is an extremely illuminating poem and I like the way you have inspired each ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: क्या गलत है?
Hi, @nanda , This poem is one the best poem I read on YWS and this is an extremely illuminating poem and I like the way you have inspired each ...
Sep 20, 2020 -
Re: Just Something about Hurricanes and Raindrops
Hi @alliyah , I think you have wrote a very good poem. I agree with @chrisdixon on the mistakes but overall it was very good and illuminating. Divyansh
Sep 20, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Hi Lee, it is nice to see that you have liked my poem and I completely agree with the mistakes you wrote about and I will try my best to ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Hi Buoranko, I am happy to know that my poem has made someone happy. The mistakes you wrote about were completely wrong and I will try hard in future not ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Hi alliyah, I am extremely happy that you liked the poem. I completely agree with the mistakes you highlighted and will try to improve it in future works. Thanks for ...
Sep 17, 2020
